A change of story idea. Tell me what you think?
A woman is sleeping soundly, in a summery (well light) park (with wide open spaces) and she starts to dream.
Dream comes out of her head. Her dream is represented by an aura, a bubble that contains her inner subconscious. It glows warmly with intense energy, swarming around her head.
We see this all taking place as the aura travels around the park, inviting the audience to join it on the dreams journey.
The camera follows the magical orb as it enters into its dream world. Beautifully intense colours engulf the scene, as we see vividly into the woman’s imagination.
we find the dream in a golden meadow, a scene of peace and tranquillity. The grass blows quietly in the summer breeze and our aura moves freely through the long grassy blades.
Back to the girl where she is twitching due to the dream turning into a bad one. It is obvious the dream she is having is bothereing her.
This changes the aura’s journey by turning the scene upside down which causes the aura to drop into the sky.
The dream slips into a very dark place where there is a load of other dreams which are reacting with each other in weird way. (Attractions, dreams exploding, displaced dreams and again a few others.)
The ball then ends its journey by returning back into the park where the dreamer is still fast asleep. It returns to her hovers over her head and pops, fading as the parts fall onto her head.
She wakes up.